You (Free Write Friday Image Prompt)

You

You

You
were just too
bright
for them to
see
imaginary,my foot,
we
sang songs to the moon
we
fought the shadows and
soon
you had to go to another’s
aid
beacuse I was stonger now
and
there were more you
had
to save.

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So sometimes I just see a prompt I can’t pass up, and this was just one of them. Got me thinking about imaginary friends and, well, this is what I just wrote without editing. I urge you to check out Free Write Fridays and see if you can find anything to catch your pen. Might work on this poem a little later but, now now, it was fun just to write it out.

 

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22 responses

  1. Very good!

    1. Thank you! I really like the concept of this guy so I think I’m going to work with him more in the future 🙂

  2. Great stuff. I wrote about a similar experience. I like the directness of yours.

    1. Well thank you and you know what they say, great minds think alike! 😉

  3. Oh, nice!! I love where your muse brought you on this! I’d so love if an imaginary bear showed up for me/my children in times of need. Well done!

  4. A very nice celebration of the power of imaginary friends. Well done.

    1. 😀 Thank you! As soon as I saw the image the thought hit me. Just one of those times where the words were right there…one of the few times, might I add.

  5. Everyone needs an imaginary friend and why not a bear. Gorgeous!

    1. Thank you and my thoughts exactly!

  6. Love the whimsy of this! Delightful read. Thanks so much for your addition to fwf! Hope to have you join us again.

    1. Well, thank you 🙂 This looks like a boat load of fun, so you’ll probably be seeing me around!

  7. Beautifully written! you showed how wonderful it is to have an imaginary friend. Very nice indeed!! 🙂

    1. I thought that this picture was just perfect for that! Was the first idea that came to my head and I just couldn’t pass it up. Thanks for the compliment and for stopping by!

  8. Nice! I enjoyed reading your contribution to this week’s prompt.

  9. Where did you get the prompt from?

    1. Sorry I didnt see this comment sooner! It is from Free Write Fridays, which you can look up via that tag.

  10. I love the take on the prompt – an imaginary friend or early spirit guide?! Children are tuned in at universe level, pity we don’t remember this skill. Loved it. Simple. Effective. Touching.

    1. Well, thank you 🙂 It was the first thing that popped up in to my mind when I saw the image and what attracted me to the prompt!

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