To this rhythm I walk
saunter, sulk,
across canvases that boast bulk
noise, talk ,
strange chatter that throws me off
hinders, halts,
sturdy steps that seldom stall,
stagger, fall,
off a path that to my heart calls
resounds, enthrall,
diverting my meter from the common throng
rights, wrongs-
–
– if you don’t dance to your own music
someone else will make you sway
to theirs.
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It’s short. It’s simple. It’s Friday, folks. Got a little ‘gotta walk your own path’ vibe going on up there. I like the way the poem flows itself, even though I haven’t pounded it out completely as it really just came to me this morning. Anywho, I hope you enjoy and hold onto that weekend. Grab it with both hands and use it as a shield against the coming week!
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This is fantastic! Love this. Have a great weekend as well! 😉
Well, thank you! 😀 I’m glad you enjoyed it and here’s to hoping you have a great weekend as well!
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– if you don’t dance to your own music
someone else will make you sway
to theirs. ” – brilliant brilliant words. Im in awe.
😀 I’m glad you enjoyed that added in. I debated on not adding it, but I really feel it just drives the point home by adding this little quip of mine at the end. Ty for reading!
Thank you for posting! Came back to WP after a little break – a lot to catch up with!
🙂 I’m glad to see ya back!
so true!
This poem’s flow and sounds bring about beautiful images. To me, the last line halts being poetry and becomes commentary.
Thank you! And it is, I just had to add that in as it is the entire feeling off the poem, and I felt it was a nice way to end it off ^_^ Thanks for reading!
What a huge difference between this poem and the one you wrote on Monday! You’re clearly writing to your mood! Love it and love this. Good job!
Thanks a million 🙂 , and I do write to my moods. I find it hard to stick with just one theme, and especially since life seems to be this lil’ roller coaster ride of crazyness! Hope you have an awesome week and thanks for reading!
Superb read!! I really enjoyed reading your poem 🙂
😀 Welllllll, thank you! I’m glad ya enjoyed it!
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